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My current problem: I have 700 words of- if I say so myself- rather nice writing, with a great deal more in the back of my mind waiting to be typed out, but I have no idea what story it's all part of.

Which sounds bizarre, I know: this has never happened to me before. I've got all this description and action and even some dialogue, but I need some point for the story to be about, something for the characters to discuss, some central tangle of their relationship or backstory or meaning or whatever for everything to turn on, and that's what I can't come up with.

It's not unusual for me to start a story with little bits and pieces; various images usually, or a line of dialogue, and to write these single sentences down as soon as I get them, so I don't forget how they go. It's part of why I always carry a notebook on me, so that I can jot down the "Everything in GenSouKai is more real than in reality" that, really, is already the whole story for me, just waiting for the rest of it to be nailed down in words. Later I'll fit these bits into their appropriate paragraphs, once I've written all of that slower stuff. But I've never had a setting and a plot and all the rest without a purpose for it; I'm used to the point coming first, and then the ideas of how to tell it.

This is the strangest sort of writer's block I've ever had.

Date: 2006-12-23 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ranalore.livejournal.com
I've had that happen a few times. Recently, even. I have a few thousand words of truly meandering DBSK fic. Of course, if I ever do find the point of that one, I'll have to overhaul Yoochun's characterization. Everyone else is pretty spot-on, considering when I started it, but Yoochun is way, way off.

Is this a YnM piece?

Date: 2006-12-23 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com
It's new to me, and it feels so strange. I'm being lazy about writing out more at the moment, even though it would probably be more helpful to finding a point than anything else I'm doing, because I'm reluctant to write out too much when I know I'll have to go back and change a great deal of it. Still, it's reassuring to hear other people have the same problem.

Nope, Swordspoint. I am still in giggly-and-bemused obsessive love!

Date: 2006-12-23 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p-zeitgeist.livejournal.com
You know, I have a friend who's always yelling at me over this very thing. I will complain that I can't write something because it's all shapeless and I have no idea what the point is, and she rants and storms about it being unnecessary to have any such thing. "It's about the characters!" she insists. "Stop making things hard for yourself! Just let them do whatever it is they seem to be doing, and it'll be fine!"

Mind you, not only can I not follow this advice, but I tend to be cross when confronted with the results of other people carrying it to extremes: I like for things to have structure, and theme, and shape. But I feel sure that if she were here listening, she'd yell at you too in more or less the same terms, so that it seems only right for me to do it for her.

I had to write out a hell of a lot of the last thing I finished before I had any damn clue what I was doing, for what it's worth. It was disorienting in the extreme. But if I hadn't written it all out before I knew exactly what I was doing, I don't think I'd have figured it out at all before the deadline.

Date: 2006-12-23 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com
I think that advice works quite well for some stories; I've done it at other times. But for this story, I have decided that I want to be Stylistic and Deep and Subtle. Or I want to try, anyway, and so I won't be sure what the characters are doing until I know why they're doing it.

Clearly I should just start writing until I figure things out, as it seems to be the surest way to fix this problem. But it seems like such a labor-intensive solution; I'm reluctant to accept that there isn't an easier way to come up with an answer. You know, like magic. Or through reading livejournal, which is what I am obviously actually doing.

Date: 2006-12-23 11:36 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scribblemoose
I get that sometimes too - the best thing I've found is to just keep writing - the plot shows itself eventually. Trust your characters - they probably know what they're doing. ^_^

Date: 2006-12-23 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com
Yep, that seems to be the general consesus of what I should do. Now to see if can actually manage it...

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