Fic: Portrait of a Voyeur (the Melon Overdub) [Yami no Matsuei, Muraki, Tsuzuki, Hisoka]

[brigdh]

Title: Portrait of a Voyeur (the Melon Overdub)
Author: Brigdh
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13, I guess.
Notes: Written for remixthedrabble. p_zeigeist wrote the original story, Portrait of the Empath as an Involuntary Voyeur. This is almost certainly one of those remixers where you do need to read the original story first.
100 words exactly.


The sorcerer creates the melon with both beauty and flavor, but also more, a one-way conduit for sensation. He neglects to mention this in the accompanying note.

The first hands to touch it are brief. They are, perhaps, curious, but for now no more than that.

But other hands come, lifting, stroking. This one enjoys pleasure and is quick to lose himself. The melon fills his mouth with cool, fragrant liquid. His knife grows slick, his fingers sticky. He scrapes soft flesh from the rind. Juice runs. He sighs extravagantly.

And when nothing remains of melon or spell, Muraki smiles.

Comments

[lady-ganesh.livejournal.com]

I wondered if that was you! That was damn fine.

[wordsofastory.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.