Ooh, that is nice. I really like your dialogue here, the "brat" and "annoying dork," the way they're playing with each other because they're so comfortable together -- I find that so sexy and yet full of affection.
And, really, the 12-year-old fangirl in me wants to chime in with something Deep and Meaningful like: Aww, so cute!
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Date: 2004-11-04 02:59 am (UTC)And, really, the 12-year-old fangirl in me wants to chime in with something Deep and Meaningful like: Aww, so cute!